An exercise from the ‘pathways to poetry workshop’ Submitted by MO on 1 October, 2012
Guernsey Literary Festival
Original by WANG JUNG Since you, sir, went away, My golden burner has had no incense, For thinking of you I am like the bright candle, At midnight vainly burning itself away.
MY VERSION Since you, sir, went away I've had a party everyday. The cat is happy, the gerble too. As for your 'photo, it's in the loo. Mo