An exercise from the ‘pathways to poetry workshop’ Submitted by MO on 1 October, 2012 – 14:16Guernsey Literary Festival
Original by WANG JUNG
Since you, sir, went away,
My golden burner has had no incense,
For thinking of you I am like the bright candle,
At midnight vainly burning itself away.
MY VERSION Since you, sir, went away I've had a party everyday. The cat is happy, the gerble too. As for your 'photo, it's in the loo. Mo